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Ben-the-Jew

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Same problems as before.

Despite all the reviews I keep seeing (including my own) on your previous submissions, you have yet to fix all of the problems that are holding this series back. Once again your visuals a great but the way you put your scenes together makes your movie confusing and uneasy to follow. You got the voice acting better but it still sounds corny (along with your humor). And a lack of sound effects is still very irritating. -and the pre-loader still needs to get in there! This file is a beast to watch with 56k without one [pre-loader]. I hope you do take notice of what everyone is telling you so that you can make this series as good as the potential it presents.
Regards, Ben Fischl

Keen Toons, eh?

Well you really have a hell of alot of talent going for you here. The animation is some of the best I've ever seen in a Flash carton and the opening intro was pretty godd but your feature has some major porblems. First of all, while it wasn't a problem for me a bet the lack of a pre-loader was very annoying to the dial-up users out there. It be nice to have some buttons or somthing to start is when you want. And if you stream yours sound maybe we could pause it as well. Second of all your voices are very hard to understand and are very low quality. What you really need is some background music better voices (or subtitles if you're going to stick with these), and sound effects. The whole recharging sequence was painful because it moved so fast and without and sound effects it was just plain boring. You ned this to be easier to follow and then it will be quite near perfect. So good luck on the next installment.

Regards, Ben Fischl

Wonderful job with your animation!

That [the animation] was very well done. If you make any more animations be sure to make them longer though. Your graphics were superbe though! Good Job.

Wow. Very good for your first try.

As most people would expect, I though I would see some shapes or some terribly draw character being thrown around a colorless background with some garbled sound effects.

....Instead, I get this very decient animation. I really like your graphics. They are very artistic and well done, don't change them. I believe your trying to send a message but I don't know what it is exactely. You may want to up your frame rate i looked like it was running on 12 fps but thats okay for begginers.

Your music choice fit with how everything was done. My only problem with it was how it looped. Not a very good loop but I got over it soon enough.

In conclusion I can only congraulate you on making your first piece of animation worth while.

An okay advertisment if anything.

Your graphics where fine and so was the music, but this animation was just very boring and pointless. My most major gripe was that the movie was soooo very small. So keep your graphics, ther'ye good but loose the small screen size and lengthen the whole project.

Sorry I didn't find that annoying

but that doesn't mean it was a bad cartoon. I didn't find much humor in this at all. The "annoying" character was hardly annoying at all. If you really want to get on peoples nerves, try taking a poll on what people hate, combine those elements, and drag it out for three minutes. You may also want to consider leting the viewer kill the annoying person.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Hmmmm. A game, eh? Hmmmmmmmm. (<Thats my thinking sound, you see)

Lets sing a song about saftey-

-because saftey is pretty important! Now that thats out of the way let me congratulate you on this movie. I love the style you went for with this. It fits perfectly. I like the artwork too, the coloring book style was great. I hope you continue on with this.

Fantastic!

Everything here deserves an A+!!! I liked the anime style used and the lip-synch was great. The Japaneese vocals made it seem really authentic. I really enjoyed listening to it. I actually learned a few words. The story was great too, and was filled with plenty of jokes and such. Once again, you get an A+!

This is the Star Wars Flash

There is no doubt in my mind that this is one of the coolest things I have ever seen. The rap is extreemly well written and each voice perfectly matches each character. The animation is superb and never gets sloppy any were. I think you could understand the entire first trilogy just by watching this. Great job!

Excellent.

I was absolutely amazed with the incredible animation in this cartoon. But I was even more so amazed by the spectacular sound effects implemented into the animation. The animation was superb-I will not deny that fact-but the way each sound effect was synced perfectly with each weapon and went off at the exact moment it would in reality and even matched the movement of the character. Just amazing......thats all I have to say.

Hello there! My name is Ben Fischl and I assume that it's nice to meet you. I have a wide range of skills ranging from animation, to voice acting, and music making! I'm always down to work on a solid idea - so please hit me up!

Ben Fischl @Ben-the-Jew

Age 34, Male

Amateur Animator

University of Oregon

Eugene, OR

Joined on 5/6/03

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